Common English Mistakes in Flash Fictions by Italian Speakers

This page focuses on errors typically made by native Italian speakers from Italy when writing a Flash Fiction in English.

Mistake Example #1

Using direct translations from Italian (e.g., 'We see us tomorrow' instead of 'See you tomorrow')

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Text corrected by:
Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA

"Nice story! I made some changes so the English would sound more natural."

In the quiet village of San Pietro, Maria would always say, "Let's take a walk this evening," and everyone knew this was the time when the sun painted the sky with colors of dreams. With a smile, her friend Luca would always reply, "Yes, we'll see each other at the piazza," as they wandered through the cobblestone streets, sharing their stories of the day. The air was filled with laughter and the scent of blooming jasmine, a perfect end to a day in their little corner of the world.

In the quiet village of San Pietro, Maria always said, "We make a walk in the evening," and everyone knew it was the time when the sun painted the sky with colors of dreams. Her friend Luca, with a smile, replied, "Yes, we see us at the piazza," as they wandered through the cobblestone streets, sharing stories of the day. The air was filled with laughter and the scent of blooming jasmine, a perfect end to a day in their little corner of the world.

Mistake Example #2

Overuse of passive voice

In the quiet village, thvillageold house wars whispered about bythe viollagd housers. It wasThey said thatthey heard strange noises were heardat night, andsaw shadowswere seen moving behind the curtains. The mystery was never solved, but the stories were told for generations, keeping the legend alive.

Text corrected by:
Vince, United States

"Just a few minor tweaks to make the sentences more active :) Good work! "

In the quiet village, villagers whispered about the old house. They said that they heard strange noises at night and saw shadows moving behind the curtains. The mystery was never solved, but the stories were told for generations, keeping the legend alive.

In the quiet village, the old house was whispered about by the villagers. It was said that strange noises were heard at night, and shadows were seen moving behind the curtains. The mystery was never solved, but the stories were told for generations, keeping the legend alive.

Mistake Example #3

Confusing singular and plural nouns

In the quiet village of Montelupo, a young girl named Sofia found herself enchanted by the moon. Every night, she would sit on the roof of her house, gazing at the sky, wondering if themoon had a secret to share. Her grandmother told her thate moon was a guardian of dreams, and Sofia believed that each star was a dream waiting to be caught. One evening, asshe reachxtendedout her hand, sheand whispered, "I wish to hold a star in my palm," and in that moment, she felt a warmth, as if thestars themselves were smiling down at her.

Text corrected by:
Gregg, Los Angeles, CA

"This needed some tweaking to correct misuse of singular/plural nouns."

In the quiet village of Montelupo, a young girl named Sofia found herself enchanted by the moon. Every night, she would sit on the roof of her house, gazing at the sky, wondering if the moon had a secret to share. Her grandmother told her the moon was a guardian of dreams, and Sofia believed that each star was a dream waiting to be caught. One evening, she extended her hand and whispered, "I wish to hold a star in my palm," and in that moment, she felt a warmth, as if the stars themselves were smiling down at her.

In the quiet village of Montelupo, a young girl named Sofia found herself enchanted by the moon. Every night, she would sit on the roof of her house, gazing at the sky, wondering if moon had a secret to share. Her grandmother told her that moon was a guardian of dreams, and Sofia believed that each star was a dream waiting to be caught. One evening, as she reached out her hand, she whispered, "I wish to hold a star in my palm," and in that moment, she felt a warmth, as if stars themselves were smiling down at her.