Common English Mistakes in Transfer Essays by Korean Speakers

This page focuses on errors typically made by native Korean speakers from South Korea when writing a Transfer Essay in English.

Mistake Example #1

Confusion with prepositions ('in', 'on', 'at')

I am writing to express my interest in transferring to your university. I have been studying at my current institution for two years, and I believe that continuing my education on your campus will provide me with better opportunities. I am particularly interested in the courses offered in your department, as they align with my career goals.

Text corrected by:
Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA

"This one doesn't have any issues."

I am writing to express my interest in transferring to your university. I have been studying at my current institution for two years, and I believe that continuing my education on your campus will provide me with better opportunities. I am particularly interested in the courses offered in your department, as they align with my career goals.

I am writing to express my interest in transferring to your university. I have been studying at my current institution for two years, and I believe that continuing my education on your campus will provide me with better opportunities. I am particularly interested in the courses offered in your department, as they align with my career goals.

Mistake Example #2

Omitting articles ('a', 'an', 'the')

I am excited to apply for transfer to your university. I believe that theprogram you offer in computer science isa perfect fit for my academic goals. During my time at mycurrent university, I have developeda strong foundation in programming and data analysis. I am eager to contribute to thevibrant community at your institution and further enhance my skills.

Text corrected by:
Michele A., Boston, Massachusetts; United States

"I added articles before some of the nouns. Otherwise, the ideas in this text are clearly expressed."

I am excited to apply for transfer to your university. I believe that the program you offer in computer science is a perfect fit for my academic goals. During my time at my current university, I have developed a strong foundation in programming and data analysis. I am eager to contribute to the vibrant community at your institution and further enhance my skills.

I am excited to apply for transfer to your university. I believe that program you offer in computer science is perfect fit for my academic goals. During my time at current university, I have developed strong foundation in programming and data analysis. I am eager to contribute to vibrant community at your institution and further enhance my skills.

Mistake Example #3

Incorrect word order in complex sentences

When I first visited the university, I was impressed by the campus, which is beautiful and vibrant. The professors, who are very knowledgeable, theyinspired me to pursue my studies in this field. I believe that transferring to this university, it will provide me with opportunities that are better for my academic growth.

Text corrected by:
Gregg, Los Angeles, CA

"This needed some tweaking to correct wording issues."

When I first visited the university, I was impressed by the campus, which is beautiful and vibrant. The professors, who are very knowledgeable, inspired me to pursue my studies in this field. I believe that transferring to this university will provide me with opportunities that are better for my academic growth.

When I first visited the university, I was impressed by the campus, which is beautiful and vibrant. The professors, who are very knowledgeable, they inspired me to pursue my studies in this field. I believe that transferring to this university, it will provide me with opportunities that are better for my academic growth.