Common English Mistakes in Ad Copies by Arabic Speakers

This page focuses on errors typically made by native Arabic speakers from Saudi Arabia when writing a Ad Copy in English.

Mistake Example #1

Misuse of verb tense (e.g., 'He go to school' instead of 'He goes to school')

DStepiscntover the magic of our new perfume, w—eachere every scenttake you on a journey through the romance and mystery ofArabian nights. YWith every spray, you'll feel thwrapped in elegance and luxurywith every spray. Don'’t miss this exclusive offer,—it cjust might trangesform the way you experience fragrance forever.

Text corrected by:
Gregg, Los Angeles, CA

"This needed some adjustments for readability and flow."

Step into the magic of our new perfume—each scent a journey through the romance and mystery of Arabian nights. With every spray, you'll feel wrapped in elegance and luxury. Don’t miss this exclusive offer—it just might transform the way you experience fragrance forever.

Discover the magic of our new perfume, where every scent take you on a journey through Arabian nights. You feel the elegance and luxury with every spray. Don't miss this exclusive offer, it change the way you experience fragrance forever.

Mistake Example #2

Overuse of formal expressions ('I am honored to inform you...')

Dear esteemed cCustomer, I amwishonored to informtell you about our latest product, twhatich will revolutionize your daily life. Itis with grakeat pleasure that Iin announceing an exclusive offer just for you, which will provide you with unparalleled benefits. We are deeplygrateful for your continued support and would be deglightead to assist you in any way possible.

Text corrected by:
Vince, United States

"This message was well-written – I just made a few minor changes to make it sound a bit less formal :) "

Dear Customer, I wish to tell you about our latest product, which will revolutionize your daily life. I take pleasure in announcing an exclusive offer just for you, which will provide you with unparalleled benefits. We are grateful for your continued support and would be glad to assist you in any way possible.

Dear esteemed customer, I am honored to inform you about our latest product that will revolutionize your daily life. It is with great pleasure that I announce an exclusive offer just for you, which will provide you with unparalleled benefits. We are deeply grateful for your continued support and would be delighted to assist you in any way possible.

Mistake Example #3

Confusion between masculine and feminine pronouns

Discover the ultimate fragrance that will captivate your senses and leave everyone around you enchanted. He iIt's designed for the modern woman who knows what she wants and isn't afraid to go after it. Experience the allure of this unique scent and let himt become your signature fragrance today.

Text corrected by:
Gregg, Los Angeles, CA

"This needed some corrections for pronoun issues."

Discover the ultimate fragrance that will captivate your senses and leave everyone around you enchanted. It's designed for the modern woman who knows what she wants and isn't afraid to go after it. Experience the allure of this unique scent and let it become your signature fragrance today.

Discover the ultimate fragrance that will captivate your senses and leave everyone around you enchanted. He is designed for the modern woman who knows what he wants and isn't afraid to go after it. Experience the allure of this unique scent and let him become your signature fragrance today.