Common English Mistakes in Landing Page Copies by German Speakers

This page focuses on errors typically made by native German speakers from Germany when writing a Landing Page Copy in English.

Mistake Example #1

Capitalizing all nouns (following German grammar rules)

Welcome to our Iinnovative Ffitness Sstudio, where Hhealth and Wwell-being are our Ttop Ppriorities. Discover our unique Aapproach to Eexercise that combines Sstate-of-the-Aart Eequipment with Ppersonalized TtrainingpPlans. Join us today and experience the Ddifference that our Ppassion for Ffitness can make in your Llife.

Text corrected by:
Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA

"This was well-written. I just needed to change some capital letters to lower case. "

Welcome to our innovative fitness studio, where health and well-being are our top priorities. Discover our unique approach to exercise that combines state-of-the-art equipment with personalized trainingpPlans. Join us today and experience the difference that our passion for fitness can make in your life.

Welcome to our Innovative Fitness Studio, where Health and Well-being are our Top Priorities. Discover our unique Approach to Exercise that combines State-of-the-Art Equipment with Personalized Training Plans. Join us today and experience the Difference that our Passion for Fitness can make in your Life.

Mistake Example #2

Overuse of passive voice

Welcome to our innovative fitness platform, where your health goals are achieved with ease. A personalized workout plan wisll be created for you, and progress is tracked automatically. Our expert trainers are consulted to ensure thatyou are guided every step of the way. Join us today,andstart a healthier lifestyle is stodarted byyou!

Text corrected by:
Michele A., Boston, Massachusetts; United States

"I changed one or two phrases from passive to active voice. Otherwise, the ideas in this text are clearly expressed."

Welcome to our innovative fitness platform, where your health goals are achieved with ease. A personalized workout plan will be created for you, and progress is tracked automatically. Our expert trainers are consulted to ensure that you are guided every step of the way. Join us and start a healthier lifestyle today!

Welcome to our innovative fitness platform, where your health goals are achieved with ease. A personalized workout plan is created for you, and progress is tracked automatically. Our expert trainers are consulted to ensure you are guided every step of the way. Join us today, and a healthier lifestyle is started by you!

Mistake Example #3

Incorrect word order in subordinate clauses

Welcome to our innovative language learning platform, where you can improve your English skills while you have fun. Our courses are designed so that you learn faster and more effectively. Whether you are abeginner or advanced, we have the right course for you. Join us today and see how quickly your confidence in English will grow!

Text corrected by:
Vince, United States

"Great writing! "

Welcome to our innovative language learning platform, where you can improve your English skills while you have fun. Our courses are designed so that you learn faster and more effectively. Whether you are a beginner or advanced, we have the right course for you. Join us today and see how quickly your confidence in English will grow!

Welcome to our innovative language learning platform, where you can improve your English skills while you have fun. Our courses are designed so that you learn faster and more effectively. Whether you are beginner or advanced, we have the right course for you. Join us today and see how quickly your confidence in English will grow!