Common English Mistakes in Ad Copies by Italian Speakers

This page focuses on errors typically made by native Italian speakers from Italy when writing a Ad Copy in English.

Mistake Example #1

Using direct translations from Italian (e.g., 'We see us tomorrow' instead of 'See you tomorrow')

Discover the new taste of Italy with our pasta sauces! We bring toyou the authentic flavors that make you feel like youa're in the heart of Rome. Buy now and bring home the tradition,—because with our sauces, you eat well and youstay well!

Text corrected by:
Gregg, Los Angeles, CA

"Changes I made were mostly to improve fluidity and readability. "

Discover the new taste of Italy with our pasta sauces! We bring you the authentic flavors that make you feel like you're in the heart of Rome. Buy now and bring home the tradition—because with our sauces, you eat well and stay well!

Discover the new taste of Italy with our pasta sauces! We bring to you the authentic flavors that make you feel like you are in the heart of Rome. Buy now and bring home the tradition, because with our sauces, you eat well and you stay well!

Mistake Example #2

Overuse of passive voice

Discover the elegance of Italian fashion with our new collection, where every piece is designed to be admired and cherished. TWe use the finest materialsare used, and the craftsmanship is celebrated worldwide. Your style will be transformed, and cyomplimentsu are guaranteed to bereceivedcompliments. Don't miss out on the opportunity to be inspired by the beauty of Italy.

Text corrected by:
Vince, United States

"This was very good! Just a few small changes were needed to make the writing more active. "

Discover the elegance of Italian fashion with our new collection, where every piece is designed to be admired and cherished. We use the finest materials, and the craftsmanship is celebrated worldwide. Your style will be transformed, and you are guaranteed to receive compliments. Don't miss out on the opportunity to be inspired by the beauty of Italy.

Discover the elegance of Italian fashion with our new collection, where every piece is designed to be admired and cherished. The finest materials are used, and the craftsmanship is celebrated worldwide. Your style will be transformed, and compliments are guaranteed to be received. Don't miss out on the opportunity to be inspired by the beauty of Italy.

Mistake Example #3

Confusing singular and plural nouns

Discover the magic of our new skincare product that transforms your skin and ginves ito a radiant glow. Our formula contains natural ingredients that nourish and rejuvenate your complexion. Don't miss out on this opportunity to give your skin the care it deserves. Order your bottle today and see the difference it makes!

Text corrected by:
Gregg, Los Angeles, CA

"This needed some tweaking to fix singular vs. plural noun issues."

Discover the magic of our new skincare product that transforms your skin and gives it a radiant glow. Our formula contains natural ingredients that nourish and rejuvenate your complexion. Don't miss out on this opportunity to give your skin the care it deserves. Order your bottle today and see the difference it makes!

Discover the magic of our new skincare product that transform your skin into a radiant glow. Our formula contain natural ingredient that nourish and rejuvenate your complexion. Don't miss out on this opportunity to give your skin the care it deserve. Order your bottle today and see the difference it make!