Common English Mistakes in Academic Journal Articles by Arabic Speakers

This page focuses on errors typically made by native Arabic speakers from Saudi Arabia when writing a Academic Journal Article in English.

Mistake Example #1

Overuse of formal expressions ('I am honored to inform you...')

In theesteemed journal of environmental studies, Iam honored to present the findings of our research on the impact of climate change on desert ecosystems. It is with great privilege that Io inform you that our study, conducted withutmost diligence, reveals significant alterations in the biodiversity of the region. I am deeplygratified to share these insights, which I believe will greatlycontributeprofoundly to the academic discourse on environmental conservation.

Text corrected by:
Vince, United States

"This was very good! Just a few small changes were made to reduce the use of overly formal English. "

In the journal of environmental studies, I present the findings of our research on the impact of climate change on desert ecosystems. It is a privilege to inform you that our study, conducted with diligence, reveals significant alterations in the biodiversity of the region. I am gratified to share these insights, which I believe will greatly contribute to the academic discourse on environmental conservation.

In the esteemed journal of environmental studies, I am honored to present the findings of our research on the impact of climate change on desert ecosystems. It is with great privilege that I inform you that our study, conducted with utmost diligence, reveals significant alterations in the biodiversity of the region. I am deeply gratified to share these insights, which I believe will contribute profoundly to the academic discourse on environmental conservation.

Mistake Example #2

Confusion between masculine and feminine pronouns

Ina recent study conducted by our research team, we explored the impact of climate change on migratory patterns of birds in the Arabian Peninsula. The findings indicate that the migratory routes have shifted significantly over the past decade. This shift is attributed to changes in temperature and availability of resources, which affects their ability to find suitable habitats during migration.

Text corrected by:
Michele A., Boston, Massachusetts; United States

"I changed some of the pronouns from gendered to gender-neutral. Otherwise, the ideas in this text are clearly expressed."

In a recent study conducted by our research team, we explored the impact of climate change on migratory patterns of birds in the Arabian Peninsula. The findings indicate that the migratory routes have shifted significantly over the past decade. This shift is attributed to changes in temperature and availability of resources, which affects their ability to find suitable habitats during migration.

In recent study conducted by our research team, we explored the impact of climate change on migratory patterns of birds in the Arabian Peninsula. The findings indicate that he migratory routes have shifted significantly over the past decade. This shift is attributed to changes in temperature and availability of resources, which affects her ability to find suitable habitats during migration.

Mistake Example #3

Misuse of verb tense (e.g., 'He go to school' instead of 'He goes to school')

Ina recent study, we examine the effects of climate change on desert ecosystems in Saudi Arabia. The data shows that temperatures have increased significantly over the past decade, which haslead to changes in vegetation patterns. Our findings suggest that if thecurrent trends continue, the biodiversity of these regions will befaced with severe threats.

Text corrected by:
Michele A., Boston, Massachusetts; United States

"Just a couple of changes to make verb tense consistent. Overall, the ideas in this text are clearly expressed."

In a recent study, we examine the effects of climate change on desert ecosystems in Saudi Arabia. The data shows that temperatures have increased significantly over the past decade, which has led to changes in vegetation patterns. Our findings suggest that if the current trends continue, the biodiversity of these regions will be faced with severe threats.

In recent study, we examine the effects of climate change on desert ecosystems in Saudi Arabia. The data show that temperature increase significantly over the past decade, which lead to changes in vegetation patterns. Our findings suggest that if current trends continue, the biodiversity of these regions will face severe threats.