This page focuses on errors typically made by native Arabic speakers from United Arab Emirates when writing in English.
| Category: | Educational & Instructional Writing Writing used in teaching and educational settings. |
| Common Users: | Teachers, Educators, Corporate Trainers. |
Educational & Instructional Writing / E-learning Module
Misuse of articles ('I have car' instead of 'I have a car')
Welcome tothe module on effective communication skills. In this lesson, we will learn how to give apresentation. First, you need to prepare thecontent carefully. Make sure you havea clear structure for your talk. Start with theintroduction, then move tothe main points, and finish with theconclusion. Practice isthe key to success, so rehearse your speech multiple times. Remember, confidence is important when you stand in front of an audience.
Text corrected by:
Gregg, Los Angeles, CA
"This needed some tweaking to add missing articles ("the," "an," etc.)."
Welcome to the module on effective communication skills. In this lesson, we will learn how to give a presentation. First, you need to prepare the content carefully. Make sure you have a clear structure for your talk. Start with the introduction, then move to the main points, and finish with the conclusion. Practice is the key to success, so rehearse your speech multiple times. Remember, confidence is important when you stand in front of an audience.
Welcome to module on effective communication skills. In this lesson, we will learn how to give presentation. First, you need to prepare content carefully. Make sure you have clear structure for your talk. Start with introduction, then move to main points, and finish with conclusion. Practice is key to success, so rehearse your speech multiple times. Remember, confidence is important when you stand in front of audience.
Educational & Instructional Writing / Educational Handout
Overuse of passive voice
In tThis handout,discusses the importance of recyclingis discussed. The environment is being protected by rRecycling efforts,protect the environment andconserve resourcesare being conserved. It is encouraged that mMore people areencouraged to get involved in recycling programs, sin order to thmatke a positive impact on the planetis made.
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Michele A., Boston, Massachusetts; United States
"I changed the sentences from the passive voice to the active voice to improve fluidity and readability."
This handout discusses the importance of recycling. Recycling efforts protect the environment and conserve resources. More people are encouraged to get involved in recycling programs in order to make a positive impact on the planet.
In this handout, the importance of recycling is discussed. The environment is being protected by recycling efforts, and resources are being conserved. It is encouraged that more people are involved in recycling programs, so that a positive impact on the planet is made.
Educational & Instructional Writing / Instructional Guide
Misuse of articles ('I have car' instead of 'I have a car')
To start cooking pasta, you need to boil water in alarge pot. Once the water is boiling, addthe pasta and stir occasionally. After thepasta is cooked, drain it using acolander and return it to thepot. Addthe sauce of your choice and mix well before serving. Enjoy your meal with family or friends.
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Miss E., Cyprus, Europe
"This is fairly well-written. However, don't forget to use articles in your sentences: for example, "boil water in large pot" should be "boil water in a large pot" and "Once water is boiling" should be "Once the water is boiling"."
To start cooking pasta, you need to boil water in a large pot. Once the water is boiling, add the pasta and stir occasionally. After the pasta is cooked, drain it using a colander and return it to the pot. Add the sauce of your choice and mix well before serving. Enjoy your meal with family or friends.
To start cooking pasta, you need to boil water in large pot. Once water is boiling, add pasta and stir occasionally. After pasta is cooked, drain it using colander and return it to pot. Add sauce of your choice and mix well before serving. Enjoy your meal with family or friends.
Educational & Instructional Writing / Lesson Plan
Overuse of passive voice
In today's lesson, pwe wilal in,troduce the studentswill be introduced to the concept of renewable energy. TWe will discuss the importance of solar power will be discussed,andhighlight the benefits of using it. We will be highlighted. Afterthen discussion,duct a group activitywill be conducted where the students willbe asked to create posters about different types of renewable energy. The postudernts willbe presented by their postudentrs to the class, and feedback will be given bythe teacherwill give feedback.
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Camille, Maryland, USA
"Nice job overall. I have just changed passive voice to active voice, which is generally a stronger form of expression. "
In today's lesson, we will introduce the students to the concept of renewable energy. We will discuss the importance of solar power and highlight the benefits of using it. We will then conduct a group activity where the students will create posters about different types of renewable energy. The students will present their posters to the class, and the teacher will give feedback.
In today's lesson plan, the students will be introduced to the concept of renewable energy. The importance of solar power will be discussed, and the benefits of using it will be highlighted. After the discussion, a group activity will be conducted where the students will be asked to create posters about different types of renewable energy. The posters will be presented by the students to the class, and feedback will be given by the teacher.
Educational & Instructional Writing / Online Course Content
Misuse of articles ('I have car' instead of 'I have a car')
Welcome to our online course about sustainable architecture. In this module, we will explore how to design abuilding that is both eco-friendly and cost-effective. You will learn aboutthe importance of using renewable materials and how to incorporate them into your projects. By theend of this course, you should be able to create aplan that meets modern environmental standards.
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Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA
"Very good! I just added some missing articles."
Welcome to our online course about sustainable architecture. In this module, we will explore how to design a building that is both eco-friendly and cost-effective. You will learn about the importance of using renewable materials and how to incorporate them into your projects. By the end of this course, you should be able to create a plan that meets modern environmental standards.
Welcome to our online course about sustainable architecture. In this module, we will explore how to design building that is both eco-friendly and cost-effective. You will learn about importance of using renewable materials and how to incorporate them into your projects. By end of this course, you should be able to create plan that meets modern environmental standards.
Educational & Instructional Writing / Training Material
Overuse of passive voice
In tThis training module,emphasizes the importance of effective communication skills. It explains emphasized. Tthe techniques for improving writing are explained, andprovides examplesare provided to illustrate common mistakes. It is suggested that pPractice exercises arshould be completed regularly to enhance proficiency.
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Camille, Maryland, USA
"Try to use active voice when possible. It's generally stronger and more direct. "
This training module emphasizes the importance of effective communication skills. It explains the techniques for improving writing and provides examples to illustrate common mistakes. Practice exercises should be completed regularly to enhance proficiency.
In this training module, the importance of effective communication skills is emphasized. The techniques for improving writing are explained, and examples are provided to illustrate common mistakes. It is suggested that practice exercises are completed regularly to enhance proficiency.