Common English Mistakes in Career Portfolios by Arabic Speakers

This page focuses on errors typically made by native Arabic speakers from Saudi Arabia when writing a Career Portfolio in English.

Mistake Example #1

Overuse of formal expressions ('I am honored to inform you...')

I amwishonored to present my career portfolio to you, showcasing my esteemedachievements and professional journey. It is with greatm pleasured thaotI informell you of my extensive experience in the field of engineering, where I have had the privilegchance to work on numerous presthigioush-level projects. I am deeply grateful for the opportunity to share my skills and accomplishments, and I am eager to contribute my expertise to your esteemedorganization.

Text corrected by:
Vince, United States

"Nice job! I just made a few small changes to improve the flow and reduce the number of formal expressions. "

I wish to present my career portfolio to you, showcasing my achievements and professional journey. I am pleased to tell you of my extensive experience in the field of engineering, where I have had the chance to work on numerous high-level projects. I am deeply grateful for the opportunity to share my skills and accomplishments, and I am eager to contribute my expertise to your organization.

I am honored to present my career portfolio to you, showcasing my esteemed achievements and professional journey. It is with great pleasure that I inform you of my extensive experience in the field of engineering, where I have had the privilege to work on numerous prestigious projects. I am deeply grateful for the opportunity to share my skills and accomplishments, and I am eager to contribute my expertise to your esteemed organization.

Mistake Example #2

Confusion between masculine and feminine pronouns

As a dedicated professional with over five years of experience in project management, I have consistently demonstrated my ability to lead teams and achieve mygoals. During my tenure at XYZ Corporation, I successfully managed a team of ten members, ensuring hwe met all project deadlines and exceeded client expectations. I am confident that my skills and experience make me an ideal candidate for the position, and I look forward to contributing to your team with hermy expertise.

Text corrected by:
Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA

"Very good! I just fixed a few issues with pronouns."

As a dedicated professional with over five years of experience in project management, I have consistently demonstrated my ability to lead teams and achieve my goals. During my tenure at XYZ Corporation, I successfully managed a team of ten members, ensuring we met all project deadlines and exceeded client expectations. I am confident that my skills and experience make me an ideal candidate for the position, and I look forward to contributing to your team with my expertise.

As a dedicated professional with over five years of experience in project management, I have consistently demonstrated my ability to lead teams and achieve goals. During my tenure at XYZ Corporation, I successfully managed a team of ten members, ensuring he met all project deadlines and exceeded client expectations. I am confident that my skills and experience make me an ideal candidate for the position, and I look forward to contributing to your team with her expertise.

Mistake Example #3

Misuse of verb tense (e.g., 'He go to school' instead of 'He goes to school')

I am writing to include my recent achievements in my career portfolio. Last year, I completed a major project that increased the company's efficiency by 20%. I also lead a team of five members who worked on developing new strategies for market expansion.

Text corrected by:
Jennifer, Detroit, Michigan USA

"Nice work! I just made some changes to the verb tense."

I am writing to include my recent achievements in my career portfolio. Last year, I completed a major project that increased the company's efficiency by 20%. I also led a team of five members who worked on developing new strategies for market expansion.

I am writing to include my recent achievements in my career portfolio. Last year, I complete a major project that increase the company's efficiency by 20%. I also lead a team of five members who work on developing new strategies for market expansion.