The happy children, majestically costume, paraded in busy streets in celebration of their school foundation. vs The happ children, majestic costumes, paraded in the streets in celebration of their foundation

Both phrases have issues with subject-verb agreement and word choice. The first phrase has a singular subject 'children' but uses the plural verb 'costume,' and 'majestically' should be 'majestic.' The second phrase has 'happ' instead of 'happy' and 'foundation' instead of 'school foundation.' Both phrases need corrections to be grammatically correct and convey the intended meaning.

Last updated: March 25, 2024 • 2173 views

This phrase is incorrect. 'Majestically' should be 'majestic' to match the noun 'costume.' Also, 'costume' should be 'costumes' to agree with the plural subject 'children.'

"The happy children, majestically costume, paraded in busy streets in celebration of their school foundation."

The correct phrase should be 'the happy children, in majestic costumes, paraded in busy streets in celebration of their school foundation.'

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That is what you get when you drop shells on a busy street in Gaza.
The people are just like happy children, - with laughter in lips and music in their hearts.
The noise of happy children, The warmth of a full house, The chill of an angry wife.
as a police vehicle involved in the search for Raynard Waits and pursuing a hot tip collided with a bus and a parked car on a busy street in the heart of Hollywood.
you encounter a person of interest in a busy street in baghdad, you're going to use your rifle?
Besides working children, there may also be hundreds of children living on the streets in major urban centres of Bolivia.
Proceed wrong way down busy street for 500 meters.
Once-busy streets are eerily silent as many have fled.
I remember a few gems you paraded in front of me.
And I am capable of empathizing with those people too, without having them paraded in front of me.
You're not like all the other girls that Lex paraded in and out of here.
During his trial, Mr Nicolaides was paraded in front of the international media in chains and told reporters that he had endured unspeakable suffering.
He had been put in a box and left on a busy street.
Because all of his victims disappeared from busy streets, crowded places, but nobody saw them go.
I was taking a stroll at dusk along a very busy street.
In the palace square and the busy streets the industrious citizens were enjoying the works of peace as though this carefree era would last forever.
Be alert when you cross a busy street!
What a lovely sight - so many happy children
In 2004, in Athens, North and South Korea paraded in the stadium under one flag.
On 10 January 2012, the organisation Open Doors reported that in December 2011 a Somali woman was flogged and paraded in public as a punishment for embracing a 'foreign religion'.

This phrase is incorrect. 'Happ' should be 'happy' to describe the children. Also, 'foundation' should be 'school foundation' to provide more context.

"The happ children, majestic costumes, paraded in the streets in celebration of their foundation"

The correct phrase should be 'the happy children, in majestic costumes, paraded in the streets in celebration of their school foundation.'

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Survivors have assembled in the streets in celebration.
Grandmothers are robbed out in the street in broad daylight.
I'll be back in the street in no time.
Shot him in the street in Hollywood.
Gunned down in the street in front of his son.
There is a dead child lying in the street in front of their homes.
You can lie down in the street in your own vomit.
We're pasting portraits - so both portraits in the streets in a crowded market.
A woman and a child get run over in the street in broad daylight.
Every household container was filled with water and left standing in the street in case of fire.
Sometimes, I see a beautiful girl walking in the street in front of me, and my heart beats faster.
I'd never dare go out in the streets in it.
If I was a father to any of my children, they'd be stoned in the streets.
I vomit in the streets the acid dollar, marching amongst dirty children, with their blind birds' eyes.
Toby was in the street in the middle of the night and said...
Or maybe we should be out in the street in front of a Greyhound bus or a vehicle.
What's going on in the street in Mumbai?
...by two men in the street in broad daylight for the food she was carrying.
If you lose the money, I'll be out in the street in "no time".
We were right there in the street in front of the hospital.

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The happy children, majestically costume, paraded in busy streets in celebration of their school foundation. vs The happ children, majestic costumes, paraded in the streets in celebration of their foundation