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the day when even the computer will be obsolete is coming vs the day which even the computer will be obsolete is coming

Both phrases are incorrect. The correct phrasing should be 'the day when even the computer will be obsolete is coming.' The use of 'when' is appropriate to introduce a time clause in this context.

Last updated: March 27, 2024 • 10189 views

the day when even the computer will be obsolete is coming

This phrase is correct. 'When' is used to introduce a time clause in this context.

This phrase is used to indicate that a future time will come when even the computer will be obsolete.
  • One of these days, this computer will be obsolete.
  • The Greek system will be obsolete in a generation if things don't change.
  • Within a few years investments in fossil fuel-based energy production, amounting to billions of euro, will be obsolete.
  • The computer will calculate and maintain the needed proximity.
  • The computers will need to stay all night.
  • In this mode the computer will respond to a wake event.
  • One millisecond later, the computer will trigger your warp jump.
  • Radio and the computer will not work.
  • Soon the computer will release us from the Blue Comet's gravitational field.
  • The computer will broadcast your opponent's image to your ID bracelet.
  • After he inputs, the computer will translate it.
  • Never say your name on the phone, or the computers will kick in.
  • The computer will only accept commands from the bridge.
  • The computer will think we're all Data.
  • The computer will discover who he is.
  • The computer will provide a hint for your next move.
  • If there's the least possibility of rousing, then... the computers will notify us.
  • If there's evidence of this city on Earth, the computer will find it.
  • If I am successful, the computer will project a false image of the enemy ship.
  • Once you enter the ventilation room, the computer will be on your right.

the day which even the computer will be obsolete is coming

This phrase is incorrect. 'Which' is not the appropriate relative pronoun to introduce a time clause.

  • One of these days, this computer will be obsolete.
  • The Greek system will be obsolete in a generation if things don't change.
  • Within a few years investments in fossil fuel-based energy production, amounting to billions of euro, will be obsolete.
  • The computer will calculate and maintain the needed proximity.
  • The computers will need to stay all night.
  • In this mode the computer will respond to a wake event.
  • One millisecond later, the computer will trigger your warp jump.
  • Radio and the computer will not work.
  • Soon the computer will release us from the Blue Comet's gravitational field.
  • The computer will broadcast your opponent's image to your ID bracelet.
  • After he inputs, the computer will translate it.
  • Never say your name on the phone, or the computers will kick in.
  • The computer will only accept commands from the bridge.
  • The computer will think we're all Data.
  • The computer will discover who he is.
  • The computer will provide a hint for your next move.
  • If there's the least possibility of rousing, then... the computers will notify us.
  • If there's evidence of this city on Earth, the computer will find it.
  • If I am successful, the computer will project a false image of the enemy ship.
  • Once you enter the ventilation room, the computer will be on your right.

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