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Tagore’s visual profile as a ‘painter’ he became in his ripe age vs Tagore’s visual profile as a ‘painter’ in his ripe age

Both phrases have issues and are not correct in English. They both have problems with word order and prepositions. A better way to express this idea would be "Tagore's visual profile as a 'painter' developed in his later years."

Last updated: April 01, 2024

Tagore’s visual profile as a ‘painter’ he became in his ripe age

This phrase is not correct. The word order is awkward and the preposition 'in' is missing.

The correct way to express this idea is to use the preposition 'in' and adjust the word order for clarity.

Alternatives:

  • Tagore's visual profile as a 'painter' he became in his later years.
  • Tagore's visual profile as a 'painter' developed in his ripe age.

Tagore’s visual profile as a ‘painter’ in his ripe age

This phrase is also not correct. It lacks clarity and the preposition 'in' is used incorrectly.

To convey the intended meaning, it is important to use the correct preposition and adjust the wording.

Alternatives:

  • Tagore's visual profile as a 'painter' in his later years.
  • Tagore's visual profile as a 'painter' developed in his ripe age.

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