Please kindly review the attached 2 separates quotation you requested for your kind review. vs Please kindly review the attached 2 separates quotation you requested for your kind perusal,

Both phrases have some issues in terms of grammar and word choice. The first phrase contains the incorrect word 'separates' instead of 'separate' and has a redundant use of 'kindly' and 'kind review.' The second phrase is more correct but still awkward due to the use of 'kindly' and 'kind perusal.' It would be better to simplify the sentence and choose one appropriate word for 'review' or 'perusal.'

Last updated: April 06, 2024 • 392 views

This phrase is not correct. It contains the incorrect word 'separates' instead of 'separate' and has redundant use of 'kindly' and 'kind review.'

"Please kindly review the attached 2 separates quotation you requested for your kind review."

Instead of 'separates,' use 'separate.' Consider using only one of 'kindly' or 'kind review' to avoid redundancy.

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Please kindly review the attached 2 separates quotation you requested for your kind review.
Please kindly contact us or review Help center for payment if you have any questions
Please kindly send us additional questions or concerns to our email: Shopping CasaCenina.com, being this section dedicated to "Review" of the products purchased, as its name:-) Best wishes.CasaCenina StaffRating: [5 of 5 Stars!]
If you need this shape box, please kindly let me know.
Please kindly inform that the fuel you want gas or natural gas.
If anyone has information please kindly comunicarmela.
Detailed models, please kindly refer to our car list attached.
Please kindly find the samples information as follows:
If you wish to be contacted within 48 hours please kindly provide it.
We can make customized products especially for you; please kindly contact us for more details.
Please kindly fill in one form per bike.
If you want to get advise from us, please kindly contact us.
Please kindly send us the picture on internet or design draft with details.
Please kindly use another search word or look in the categories.
For other quotation please kindly contact our booking office.
Please kindly inform our Customer Service via our Support Center.
Please kindly ask the prices for the requested period.
Please kindly accept Color and Size have error depends on real items.
Please kindly note that It is not possible to smoke in the rooms.
So please kindly respect his wishes!
Please kindly accept 10 million Yen as our payment for 6 months.

Alternatives:

Please review the attached 2 separate quotations you requested for your review.

This phrase is not entirely correct. It is better than the first one but still awkward due to the use of 'kindly' and 'kind perusal.'

"Please kindly review the attached 2 separates quotation you requested for your kind perusal,"

Consider simplifying the sentence and choosing one appropriate word for 'review' or 'perusal.' Avoid using both 'kindly' and 'kind perusal.'

Show examples from the web [+]

Please kindly review the attached 2 separates quotation you requested for your kind perusal,
Please kindly contact us or review Help center for payment if you have any questions
Please kindly send us additional questions or concerns to our email: Shopping CasaCenina.com, being this section dedicated to "Review" of the products purchased, as its name:-) Best wishes.CasaCenina StaffRating: [5 of 5 Stars!]
If you need this shape box, please kindly let me know.
Please kindly inform that the fuel you want gas or natural gas.
If anyone has information please kindly comunicarmela.
Detailed models, please kindly refer to our car list attached.
Please kindly find the samples information as follows:
If you wish to be contacted within 48 hours please kindly provide it.
We can make customized products especially for you; please kindly contact us for more details.
Please kindly fill in one form per bike.
If you want to get advise from us, please kindly contact us.
Please kindly send us the picture on internet or design draft with details.
Please kindly use another search word or look in the categories.
For other quotation please kindly contact our booking office.
Please kindly inform our Customer Service via our Support Center.
Please kindly ask the prices for the requested period.
Please kindly accept Color and Size have error depends on real items.
Please kindly note that It is not possible to smoke in the rooms.
So please kindly respect his wishes!
Please kindly accept 10 million Yen as our payment for 6 months.

Alternatives:

Please review the attached 2 separate quotations you requested for your perusal.

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